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Critique by *artildawn Jul 30, 2012, 1:43:05 PM
The overall design is pretty good and the light choice is nice, but you're being beaten in the details. I'm not sure how you went about constructing the city, but the nice straight line are overshadowed by the points where it looks like you freehanded them. If the were all wavy it wouldn't be such an issue. But since the majority are clean and strait, the few wavy, irregular sections really draw attention.

For Spiderman's pose, you have good elements, but the don't necessarily fit well together. For example, the bent leg and the chest/upper abdomen look good to me but the waist/hip are seem a bit disjointed to me. The hip in particular ruins the graceful curves of the pose.

Again, overall a decent design. Just bit more attention to the details.
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Critique by *Adovion Jul 29, 2012, 4:38:49 PM
The thing I really like about this drawing is definitely the lighting. I think you did a really great job with this drawing. There are a few mishaps I see, like with Spiderman’s proportion i.e. his hips look kinda off, and his left arm (to me anyway) looks kinda… wired, but the overall painting, texture details and background look really nice. I love the dramatic sense in the scene and I think you captured Spiderman nicely as he swings through the city. The simplistic background to is a nice touch, which makes you focus more on Spiderman.

Keep up the good work :)
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*cheetah-natz Apr 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how I saw it and I fall in the pic.
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*jakeandersonstudio Apr 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks man!
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Mood: Stunned ~comic-geek-designer Jan 24, 2013
ooooooooooooh
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~Drawer888 Oct 21, 2012
Dude.....wow
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Mood: Wow! *Giando1611990 Aug 20, 2012   Digital Artist
This one is great!
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Mood: Love ~Arthusbuttkick Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Stunning job. :)
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Mood: Love ~peccatori Jul 31, 2012
Wow! It's very beautiful :iconinuclapplz:
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~theLUsir Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome artwork! Great attention to detail! :thumbsup:
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~Sonicblur2-0 Jul 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool!
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*jakeandersonstudio Jul 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Wow guys, thanks for the love here. As Artildawn mentioned, there are a few things that could still use some tweaking, and I'm going to wait a bit before tweaking them so that I'm not so attached to the painting.
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